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Task 1: The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. 

The graphs show information on various garbage disposal techniques used in a certain nation between 1960 and 2011.

Overall, the quantity of paper, food, and other garbage that was disposed of significantly decreased throughout the time period. Contrarily, a greater proportion of plastic, wood, and food was discarded by consumers. An additional point is that the disposal of other things stayed fairly steady.

Initially, a quarter of paper was thrown away in 1960, but in 2011 this percentage decreased by 10%. Concerning textiles, this sector likewise had a minor drop of 6% (from 17% to 11%) during the same time period. Additionally, in 2011 people eliminated 3 times less additional waste than the original figure of 13%.

Furthermore, it is evident that compared to 2010, the amount of plastic and food waste increased by nearly 10% in 2011. Additionally, consumers disposed of two times as much wood in 1960, amounting to 8%.

Lastly, glass, metal, and green garbage disposal rates all stayed fairly consistent during the time period. In particular, just around 5% of glass was thrown away compared to the disposal of the two latter categories at around 9%.

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Task 2:  Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common practice in contemporary society for large corporations to promote products via a variety of sporting events, teams, and players. Based on my perspective, despite the fact that this method could help maintain financial stability for the sports industry, it should be viewed as being negative due to the de-emphasis on the sporting spirit. 

Corporate sponsorship proponents praise its flexibility in terms of finance. The majority of broadcast games, from American sports like basketball and baseball to international ones like football and rugby, are free for fans. Advertising during commercial breaks, billboards outside of the arenas, and product placement, including on player uniforms, are the only things that make this feasible. The money raised from such sponsorship not only permits free broadcasting of the games but also allows club owners to maintain top-notch facilities and pay the highest-paid players. Owners would not be able to support their club in case advertising were prohibited, and players would eventually move for leagues with higher salaries.

On the other hand, I agree with those who claim that sports leagues may suffer unintended consequences as a result of advertising. First off, there are certain vices among viewers and supporters of unhealthy merchandise. For instance, should young football fans watch their favourite players using alcohol or cigarettes, they might well be persuaded to do the same. Second, too many commercials may annoy some viewers since they are easily distracted while watching, which causes some of them to lose interest in sports. Nowadays, many just see sports as a means of making money.

In conclusion, people may have different perspectives on whether or not more product advertising has a positive effect on sports; nonetheless, in my opinion, this tendency is beneficial to sports.

  • De-emphasis (n): sự xem nhẹ
  • Product placement (n): quảng cáo cài cắm sản phẩm
  • League (n): giải thi đấu


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